How does your film fit in the ethos of the institution? 

Unfortunately our film would not be picked up by a big distribution company like warner bros or 20th century fox because we do not have the famous actors that would be useful in the advertisement section of the distribution. Vertigo films however do make relatively low budget films which would fit with my thriller, although we would have to include several special effects that may raise the cost a fraction. I can definitely see my thriller being advertised on their website as it fits in with many other thrillers they have produced as well as crime films. My thriller would be a nice mix and addition to the variety of films they make annually.

How would you make money out of your film – would it be shown in an art house cinema a chain cinema. 

I would make money out of my film by advertising it around areas where it is more youthful. I think it would shown in a chain cinema as it would be a very popular genre and would be successful among a large crowd of young to adults. Trailers should be sent on radios and TV's and posters should be made on buses and sub way trains as well as the stops. It would be released as a DVD as well as premiering in cinemas.

Why would your chosen company wish to make your film?

Vertigo Films would make my film because they are a small British film production and distribution company that have been very successful in thriller/crime genres which is what my thriller is. They are also local, based in London. They're mission is to create and distribute commercially driven independent cinema. This works conveniently with my thriller as we are independently filming and creating our film, as well as us being able to spread the word of our thriller via internet uses i.e. online posters and ads.


What other films have they made in a similar vein to yours?

Vertigo Films has produced several outstanding films that have been successful in the box offices that are similar to my thriller idea. The movies they have made vary between thriller and crime i.e. The Sweeney, which got a nomination for a British Independent Film Award for Best Achievement in Production, The Football Factory, which won a Kodak Award for Best Cinematography, Spring Breakers, winning over 10 awards pertaining to the Production and Cinematography. All of the latter are crime based films that Vertigo Films produced and achieved high ranks in doing so. They have also created thrillers i.e. Monsters, which won British Independent Film Award for Best Achievement in Production, Best Technical Achievement and Best Director, I'm the Angel of Death is a crime and thriller which is similar to my thriller. It was very successful which is why I think my thriller would also be successful.

What age (remember it should be within 3-4 years, and reflect your certificate)?
The age group that would be our ideal target audience is 15-18 year old, seeing as though we have a significant amount of violence that would not be suitable for younger than 15 however our violence would be strategically edited so that the goriness would not be displayed very much, therefore allowing 15 year olds to watch it.
žWhat gender?
The gender that my thriller would most likely appeal to is males, as I believe that they would appreciate the storyline as well as the thrilling moments in the film more than a woman would.
žWhat will they be like and be into?
They would mostly enjoy TV shows such as CSI and psychological films that would make them think. They would stereotypically do well in school but not the ultimate nerd as they still appreciate film and music. They would be into music such as Led Zeppelin, Pierce the Veil, Breathe California etc.
žWhy would they like your film?
They would like my film because it has an original story line and a constant revelation that would make the audience want to keep watching.
žHow will you attract them within the first 2 mins?
The way in which my 2 minute opening sequence would attract them is because within two minutes we would have a lot of suspense and an effective ending that would intrigue them and want to know more about the character and who he has just killed. It brings up a lot of questions that would make our audience want to keep watching the film.


Taken

Date: February 27th, 2008
Director: Pierre Morel
Main Actor: Liam Neeson
Studio: Europa Corp & 20th Century Fox

How are they similar?
Taken and our Thriller have similar plot lines as they are both about a male protagonist who search for their missing daughter.

What have you changed
The only difference is that in Taken the father knows that his daughter has been kidnapped where as in our thriller the father is aware that his daughter is dead and he wants to find out the reason for her death, and the events of the night that his son died to cause the death of his daughter.

Dexter
First Episode Date: October 1, 2006
Created by: James Manos Jr.
Main Actor: Michael C. Hall
Studio: Show time Networks
How are they similar?
Dexter is a crime based TV Film, focusing on a male protagonist, which is similar to our film as the protagonist investigates the crime scene in which his son died, which then caused his daughter to die. Dexter, like our protagonist, has a profession that requires him to investigate crimes. They are similar, as they are portrayed as the good guys at first however, they are both discovered to be murderers. They both kill in revenge.
What have you changed?
The differences are found in the fact that my thriller is a film, where as Dexter is a TV show, as well as the fact even though they are both murderers, dexter kills several people and does it to previous murderers who have gotten away with their crime, where as my main character only kills the girl responsible for the death of his children.


CSI
First Episode Date: October 6, 2000
Creator: Anthony E. Zuiker, Anne Donahue
Main Actor: Georgie Eads
Studio: Jerry Bruckheimer Films
How are they similar?
Both CSI and my thriller follow the crime thriller genre. They both include murderers and investigations that lead to missing people or dead.
What have you changed?
Firstly, CSI is a TV show where as ours is a film, this can be quite a difference seeing as though there is much more to include in a TV show rather than a film. There is also only one story line in my thriller, where as in CSI they have several different crime investigations going on at different times as well as them dealing with many different characters and situations.

Prisoners
Date: September 18, 2013
Director: Denis Villeneuve
Main Actor: Hugh Jackman
Studio: Warner Brothers, Alcon Entertainment
How are they similar?
Both films include a male protagonist who investigate how and why their daughter has gone missing. They both provide a thrilling aspect as well as a means of sympathy as we see the sensitive side of the males as they break down because they have lost their daughter.
What have you change?
They differ as in Prisoners, the male character does not know whether or not his daughter is alive, where as in my thriller, the male character is aware of the death of his daughter, however he does not know what led to her death.








What were you filming and why?

We filmed our second opening sequence idea, that included a young girl very sad at a train station and a shot of her father looking very stressed and then receiving a very important phone call that his daughter just jumped in front of a train. We filmed this because we felt that our first test shoot/sequence idea was poor and did not have enough detail to its story line nor did it build tension effectively.

What substitutions did you make in the test filming and why?
In the second sequence we used normal stairs instead of the escalators of a train station, we did this because we do not have any escalators in our school and we were unable to shoot outside of school grounds for the test shoot.I mimed drinking, that was supposed to be a bottle of liquor to show that she was severely depressed and turned to alcohol to get through it. I sat on a wall instead of a train station bench to keep with the consistency of the location, we remained in the same area to keep the shoot basic and less complicated. We also substituted a small wall ledge for the train track ledge, because we could not shoot at a train station, as well as not doing this for safety reasons.
We also used me as the girl, however I can not be acting in the actual shoot as I will be behind the camera and we used Jamie instead of the father as he was a male actor in our group.
What camera angles and camera movements were you testing and why?

We tested a low angle of the girl coming down the stairs to see the effect it would have in terms of defining her character. I do not think it gave the right effect as we wanted to portray the girl as a sad and vulnerable character, however filming from a low angle made it boring in my opinion and did not show the emotions on the girls face that we wanted to show.
We also tested the close up on the girls hand to show her nervousness and to be closer to her character from an audience's perspective. I think this worked well and was effective in terms of conveying her emotions to the audience. It also looked good and worked well.

Did you find this process useful as a group?

Yes, it made our idea clearer and showed us the amount of detail we had to put into our idea. It had too much story line happening for a title sequence, even though it was short, this was only because we did a basic exploration of the camera angles, not all the angles we would be using that would lengthen the piece further. This process helped us evaluate our mistakes which were deciding on our story board and the angles we want to shot before going out and shooting as it became just a brainstorming session with filming in between instead of just shooting the sequence.
What worked well?

The use of a close up on the girl's hands worked well and it will be very effective in our new sequence as there is a shot when he holds a whisky glass, and we want a close up on the whisky glass to show the importance of it as well as revealing more and more about the character without revealing his face because we want to leave his identity hidden to create a sense of mystery. The pace of the piece was effective however we found that not very much worked well and there wasn’t anything that we would recycle in terms of story line that we would use when shooting our new and actual thriller title sequence.

What didn’t go well?

First of all we filmed the sequence with an IPhone, this meant we had the option to film in landscape or portrait, without realizing we filmed it both ways which looked bad and amateur.
We also did not have the appropriate location required to get the right mood and tone of the sequence. The fact that we filmed it outside completely changed the feel of the piece and we did not see how it was working in terms of creating tension and building the suspense high enough to get the audience to feel intriguing by the piece. I believe we were not passionate enough about the story line of the sequence to make it look good. We, again, did not film enough which left us with a shorter video then intended.
When it came to editing I tried to make it look as smooth as possible but because of continuity issues this was not an easy task. I also tried to make the effect of her falling by zooming in with editing effects, because of the lack of footage it did not work well but the idea can be seen clearly which was what we had intended for this test shoot.
The location was different as well from what we wanted it to be and we realized how difficult it would be to film at an empty train station, let alone a girl jumping in front of a train without using tricky effects.

How has this influenced you with the next stage of your idea?

It has helped our group recognize the importance of a story board with camera work detailed and planned along with timing. As well as keeping a very close eye on continuity because it can either make time in the editing suite much more difficult or even impossible, therefore we would have to cut a lot of he footage which might end us up in a position where we must go back and shoot more or we will have a title sequence that does not meet the required time limits.
What were you filming and why?

We filmed Jamie walking through a forest, from different angles, as we wanted our shoot to focus on the camera angles in which we would be filming our sequence. We filmed him doing a simple walk to test how the shots would look as well as the time frame and how we would be able to build suspense from that.

What substitutions did you make in the test filming and why?

We used Jamie instead of an older business man, because we did not have anyone of that age who was available for our shooting day. It was simple to use Jamie because he is a male, and is part of our group which meant he knew exactly what he had to do and was very cooperative when shooting different angles with the same pace.
We also substituted a black pipe for a dead body because we wanted to work on camera work instead of mise en scene. This did not affect the way in which we filmed our test shoot, it was not necessary to have a dead body.
The lighting was not what we wanted for this sequence, we wanted it to be set in the night time but unfortunately we were unable to film it at night due to restrictions and regulations as well as schedule clashes.

What camera angles and camera movements were you testing and why?

We tested the over the shoulder shot, to see how effective it would be in terms of tension building and mystery towards the character of the girl. I thought it was effective because there was a sense of unknown because we cannot see the girls face, however we can tell she is watching the man walking very intensely and suspiciously which worked well when referring back to building suspense within the sequence.
We also tested a close up of the man's face when he senses that someone is watching him, this was meant to intensify his emotions and convey to the audience that there is something wrong. However, when shooting did this not work well, as we did not find the correct angle to show his face, I think it would have worked better as a low angle but instead we went for a straight shot of his face. This was so badly filmed that we decided not to include it in the test shoot edited version however it was a good learning experience.
Finally, we tested a point of view shot that I found very unique and effective. It puts the audience in the victim's perspective, therefore intensifying the thrill of the sequence as well as creating a different way of showing a character's nervousness in the situation.

Did you find this process useful as a group?

I found this process useful to a certain extent as we realized how much work our sequence needed in many sense, i.e. timing, the sequence was extremely short, as well as our story line was not suspenseful enough and not enough was happening for it to create an audience reaction. We also had a group member missing when we filmed this shoot which made the process more difficult because we had less people to work with and less creativity in the group. However it was very helpful in terms of going out and shooting something, how time consuming and precise it is.

What worked well? I.e. what camera work are you going to carry forward to your idea? What location? Pace?

The over the shoulder shot worked well as it carried a sense of mystery that we definitely want to keep in our new sequence because the man's identity remains a secret till the end. It is very effective because you can see the back of their head which instantly makes the audience want to know more about the character which is exactly the kinds of emotions we want the audience to be feeling throughout the sequence. A sense of 'who is this person?' and 'why can't I see him?'. When thinking about these questions it almost then gives the character a sense of authority and power.

What didn’t go well?

The location for this sequence was wrong, it seemed almost unrealistic to have that scenario in the woods or even more stereotypical of any thriller one would see where someone is brutally murdered when they were wondering alone in the woods at night.
The close up on Jamie's face did not work because it did not convey the right emotions and had no meaning to just add a close up on his face where as it would have made more sense to go for a low angle as if someone might have been looking up at him or even a high angle to give his character a sense of vulnerability. The establishing shot, also, did not work as well as we had hoped. It did not contributed in any way to the story line nor did it create a certain mood or tone for the sequence.
The sequence as a whole did not build as much tension as we had hoped because the timing of the shots were not thought out properly, so for the cuts to make sense when it came to editing we found that the shots were all very short and static which killed the tension and suspense that was supposed to be created with the mysterious girl following him.
The effect of the girl being in different locations while the man walked on the same path did not quite portray the supernatural effect we were looking for. I thought it was going to look as if she had quickly ran from one place to another with super speed powers or something of the sorts. However it just looked as if it was an error or it would have simply confused the audience. We also tried to abide by the 180 degree rule but at a certain point we fail to abide by it and the girl is on the other side of the screen.

How has this influenced you with the next stage of your idea?

This test shoot has helped me realize the importance of deciding the timing for each shot, and why it will last as long as we decided it too. This will help our shooting day process move much more smoothly and effectively. It has also helped in deciding what camera work we want to use for our shoot, i.e. the point of view shot is unique and will make our piece stand out as well as building the character's tension within the scene effectively.