Feedback from Idea #1 Pitch

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We pitched our "lost boys"/ Electric Feel by MGMT idea to Luke. We got a lot of different feedback, however we had a lot of elements that were suggested we changed or adjusted.

Luke immediately stated that the song had been used before. This means, if we keep our initial idea we would have to keep a similar song however it needs to have the same vibe as well as the symbolism in the lyrics.

He also found the idea of filming in the streets of sheer would be an issue, seeing as though it is quite a nice area it would cause a bit of chaos and possible issues with the people of the town. He then suggested that we could film in London and have a sort of city landscape time lapse.

Luke also found that the idea of the inside of the tent would seem a bit too obvious or as if they are at a festival which is not what we were intending on portraying.

This is the other feedback he gave us:

  • projections on tents
  • don't project peter pan
  • could look comical 
  • smashing things isn't a good idea
  • just shoot in the forest
  • direct a fan at sheets 
  • have abstract things hanging from the trees
  • city views in time-lapse 
  • project city scape onto sheets in forest
  • would need projectors, generators etc
  • think about the location - peaslake?
  • have a band playing and project it on sheets
  • 3 differently sizes shots of band projected on sheets
  • shoot in studio first, then on location
  • need some action in the forest
  • be careful with narrative

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