Feedback on Blanched

Names (all teenagers within the ages of 16-17)	What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?	What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?	How do you think this thriller could be made even more effective and why?
John Harris	It is about a serial torturer and includes a police investigation. (Attack on Wallstreet)	The lighting of the cigarette and the way it did not light. His frustration throughout the sequence was also effective.	Maybe attempt to not show the hammer until you see the girl screaming. Little less panting would have been better.
Rosie Drumm	About the main character within the opening, his story, why he's doing what he's doing.	The build up to the action creates tension well. POV shot, puts us into the characters position.	More sound? Lighting could have been darker and more ambient.
Eve Notting	The man that we see is the main character, he struggles with depression and takes it out on other people.	The build up to the main action creates tension. POV shots – puts us in the victims shoes which makes the man look even more evil.	Could see more of the character and show more of the man looking her thinking about what he's going to do. Lighting could have been darker.
Jack Kim	Guy kidnapped someone, considering what to do, kills the person he kidnapped. Follows the story of the killer and how he has dealt with this and he did it.	The POV shot because it puts us in the view of the victim.	The variation of the shots when he is drinking and is in the sitting room.
Roy Lee	About a killer who systematically kills girls.	The music within the sequence worked very well.	The whisky could have looked more realistic.
Georgina Keeg	The main character goes around kidnapping more girls and killing them.	The soundtrack worked well with the vibe of the thriller.	Could have made the lighter work, make him look more like a bad man.
Richard Chin	Follows a psycho who kills innocent women and keeps one of their body parts as a trophy (since he hammered her toe) About the alcoholic who kills when he drinks.	It was very good when it came to building tension throughout the sequence. I like the POV shot because it is personal and we see a low angle shot of the psycho.	The lighting could have been darker. As well as possibly hearing the victim in the background to give a slight clue in the sequence.
Lisa Bos	He kidnaps people and kills them, he has two sides to him (schizophrenia)	The wait – watching him and waiting to see what he does. The suspense created.	Revealed the girl even earlier and maybe have seen more of her.
Stephanie Green	It would carry the themes of self-battle and stress. About the man's stress and journey as a serial killer.	Unexpected danger tied in with the sound. Mystery – not showing her face. The POV worked well and continuity.	Darker lighting would have been better. Some idea of the victim.
Sabrina Carey	Murdered/Rapist that kidnaps girls and kills them	The casualness. The shock when suddenly he kills the girl. The fact that we did not see her face.	Lighting could have been darker, and suggest that they could have filmed at night instead of in daylight.